This email contains my aardvark comments on draft 7 of the Austin Group
Revision XCU6 volume. It contains 14 editorial comments.
Thanks,
Don Cragun
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@ page 2261 line 2414-2423 section 2.10 Editorial [DWC-45]
Problem:
(shell grammar case_item_ns and case_item non-terminals)
In most non-terminals in the shell grammar with like non-terminals on the
right hand side, the like non-terminals are aligned. In the changes made to
the case_item_ns and case_item non-terminals, the linebreak and pattern
non-terminals are not aligned.
Action:
Change:
case_item_ns : pattern ')' linebreak
| pattern ')' compound_list linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' compound_list linebreak
;
case_item : pattern ')' linebreak DSEMI linebreak
| pattern ')' compound_list DSEMI linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' linebreak DSEMI linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' compound_list DSEMI linebreak
;
on P2261, L2414-2423 to:
case_item_ns : pattern ')' linebreak
| pattern ')' compound_list linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' compound_list linebreak
;
case_item : pattern ')' linebreak DSEMI linebreak
| pattern ')' compound_list DSEMI linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' linebreak DSEMI linebreak
| '(' pattern ')' compound_list DSEMI linebreak
;
Although not changed in this draft, similar alignment should also be applied
to the case_clause, case_list_ns, and case_list non-terminals on P2261,
L2404-2413 (aligning the "Esac", "case_item_ns", and "case_item" non-
terminals respectively.
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@ page 2364,2369 line 6167,6401 section awk Editorial [DWC-46]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in awk extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P2364, L6167 to "'\\'".
Change "'\'" on P2369, L6401 to "'\\'".
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@ page 2401 line 7746 section bc Editorial [DWC-47]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in bc extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P2401, L7746 to "'\\'".
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@ page 2546 line 13185,13187 section ed Editorial [DWC-48]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in ed extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P2546, L13185 to "'\\'".
Change "'\'" on P2546, L13187 to "'\\'".
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@ page 2562,2571,2578 line 13834,14190,14473 section ex Editorial [DWC-49]
Problem:
(single-quote character constant in ex extended description)
The character constant representing the single-quote character is "'\''".
Action:
Change "'''" on P2562, L13834 to "'\''".
Change "'''" on P2571, L14190 to "'\''".
Change "'''" on P2578, L14473 to "'\''".
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@ page 2571,2592 line 14190,15031-15033 section ex Editorial [DWC-50]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in ex extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P2571, L14190 to "'\\'".
Change "'\'" on P2592, L15031 to "'\\'".
Change "'\'" on P2592, L15032 to "'\\'".
Change "'\'" on P2592, L15033 to "'\\'".
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@ page 2674 line 18187 section gencat Editorial [DWC-51]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in gencat extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P2674, L18187 to "'\\'".
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@ page 2739 line 20612 section lex Editorial [DWC-52]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in lex extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P2739, L20612 to "'\\'".
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@ page 2822 line 23989 section make Editorial [DWC-53]
Problem:
(single-quote character constant in make application usage)
The character constant representing the single-quote character is "'\''".
Action:
Change "'''" on P2822, L23989 to "'\''".
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@ page 3011 line 31339 section qsub Editorial [DWC-54]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in qsub extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P3011, L31339 to "'\\'".
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@ page 3015 line 31461 section read Editorial [DWC-55]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in read extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P3015, L31461 to "'\\'".
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@ page 3044-3045 line 32502-32504 section sed Editorial [DWC-56]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in sed extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P3044, L32502 to "'\\'".
Change "'\'" on P3044, L32503 to "'\\'".
Change "'\'" on P3045, L32504 to "'\\'".
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@ page 3126 line 35632 section tr Editorial [DWC-57]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in tr extended description)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P3126, L35632 to "'\\'".
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@ page 3276 line 41276 section yacc Editorial [DWC-58]
Problem:
(backslash character constant in yacc rationale)
The character constant representing the backslash character is "'\\'".
Action:
Change "'\'" on P3276, L41276 to "'\\'".
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