hi All
Here's the Open Group editorial comments on TC1 D5.
Please note the correction to the PAX update which
catches an error in the original aardvark -- the default
for globexthdr.name is $TMPDIR/GlobalHead.%n and
not %d/GlobalHead.%n as stated in the aardvark.
regards
Andrew
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@ page 1 line 64 section xbd_tc1_d5_6 editorial
Problem:
Should mention in rationale that the year is deliberately missed out.
Action:
Add to the end of the Rationale on line 89
The approval year of the ISO 4217 standard is intentionally omitted to
allow for future versions.
@ page 1 line 208 section xbd_tc1_d5_16 editorial
Problem:
Ordering
Action:
Swap with No. 17
@ page 1 line 341 section xsh_tc1_d5_5 editorial
Problem:
Line number is 1250.
Action:
Fix
@ page 1 line 383 section xsh_tc1_d5_8 editorial
Problem:
Out of page ordering
Action:
Should appear after No. 15.
@ page 1 line 597 section xsh_tc1_d5_18 editorial
Problem
Where should new APP USAGE text be added?
Also note that RFC 2181 is not included in the Informative References.
Action:
Add new APP USAGE to the end of the Application Usage section.
Add RFC 2181 to Informative references.
@ page 1 line 678 section xsh_tc1_d5_24 editorial
Problem:
Wrong line number, also incorrect description in "from" part,
also where should application usage go?
Action:
Change Line number on line 678 from 18091 to 18090.
The text quoted in the "from" DESCRIPTION on 681 is incorrect and
should say: "... allocate new file descriptors may fail ...".
The new APP USAGE text should note that it is to be added at the
end of the existing Application Usage text.
@ page 1 line 766 section xsh_tc1_d5_32 editorial
Problem:
Wrong line number
Action:
correct line number to 23942.
@ page 1 line 874 section xsh_tc1_d5_46 editorial
Problem:
Second change, wrong line number
Action:
correct line number is 35730.
@ page 1 line 959 section xsh_tc1_d5_49 editorial
Problem:
The FUTURE DIR and RAT changes should be swapped round.
Action:
Reorder.
@ page 1 line 1018 section xsh_tc1_d5_56 editorial
Problem:
Wrong line number
Action:
Line number is 41734 (twice line 1018,1019).
@ page 1 line 1098 section xsh_tc1_d5_61 editorial
Problem:
Wrong line number
Action:
Line number is 45441
@ page 1 line 1509 section xcu_tc1_d5_19 editorial
Problem:
Wrong line number
Action:
Line numbers are 11588-11592
@ page 1 line 1540 section xcu_tc1_d5_21 editorial
Problem:
Line numbers and other typo corrections needed
Action:
Line 1541: Should be 12688-
First change (OPERANDS) is line 12690 and should say "If any operand is
-n, ...".
Second change (line 1548) should refer to line 12691.
Change (In the STDOUT section) "Mark with the XSI margin ..." should
refer to line 12729.
@ page 1 line 1788 section xcu_tc1_d5_27 editorial
Problem:
Line numbers
Action:
Line number is 18565-18567.
@ page 1 line 1788 section xcu_tc1_d5_32 editorial
Problem:
Last sentence of rationale has typo
Action:
Fix end of Rationale: "... but the change was overlooked."
@ page 1 line 2042 section xcu_tc1_d5_33 editorial
Problem:
Page number
Action:
Second change is page 681.
@ page 1 line 2042 section xcu_tc1_d5_35 editorial
Problem:
Misapplied aardvark
Action:
Change to line 27063 should be
from "$TMPDIR/GlobalHead.%n".
to
"$TMPDIR/GlobalHead.%p.%n".
@ page 1 line 2104 section xcu_tc1_d5_38 editorial
Problem:
Ordering
Action:
Swap with No. 39
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